Journal Entry with line breaks.

Poetically speaking, I’m in bad shape lol. My inner critic is yelling at me that this is not really poetry. But I will keep trying and keep writing and maybe I’ll come back to look at this later and find something salvageable.

Journal Entry with line breaks

I know an eight year old.

He likes to tell me I’m ugly and fat.


After all, I suffer from self-esteem.

He has a cure for it.

I try not to care, but I do.

Just a little.


It’s like this game I play.

No matter how powerful you may be,

somewhere in the world, a bunny rabbit

can and will kick your ass.


This feels exactly like that.

Damn. I’m not as mature as I thought.


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